Talk:heart attack

RFC discussion: October 2011
Sense one should read smoothly in one sentence; sense two needs to be better defined and its example sentence should be separated from the definition. ---&gt; Tooironic 23:36, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Good now? (I've detagged, as I think it's fine. Feel free to re-tag it if you disagree.) &#x200b;—msh210℠ (talk) 23:52, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Beautiful. Thanks. ---&gt; Tooironic 01:15, 4 October 2011 (UTC)