Talk:run-on sentence

a poem
i found a poem, My Baby Brother by Ian Aitken, whose content is mostly a single run-on sentence. it's written from the point of view of a small child, much like the sentence i came up with about icecream in the sand. i would switch this out for the one i wrote but for the fact that it's almost the entire poem. Here it is:
 * My baby brother is a killer
 * He pulls my hair and throws me down on the floor and spits in my face and squeezes my nose and takes off my glasses and then tries them on and throws them away and he jumps on my stomach and he bites my toes and he counts my fingers and my mother says, "Ian get off the floor."

Even the mom talks like that, I guess. — Soap — 19:51, 10 October 2023 (UTC)