Talk:tenderloin

...which it is easy for police to blackmail and extort.
I suggest rephrasing this to, "...which are easy for police to blackmail and extort." That way the plural verb refers to businesses rather than district, because:
 * 1. the word "businesses" occurs physically closer to the phrase quoted,
 * 2. logically one can blackmail and extort businesses (although one at a time), but not a district, and
 * 3. it struck me as jarring when I read it for the first time.

☺ Dick Kimball (talk) 06:37, 21 May 2017 (UTC)


 * ✅. Thanks for noticing the issue. - -sche (discuss) 08:31, 21 May 2017 (UTC)