Thread:User talk:Yair rand/Edit request for protected page

Finding no way to request an edit to a protected page, I asked for help at the Grease pit and was advised to ask an admin; thus I'm here.

Looking at the criteria for inclusion, I noticed several spots that could stand to have commas added. Is it appropriate for you to make such changes without a vote? If so, would you please add them after every occurrence of "for example" that doesn't already have a comma? Thanks!